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Friday 3 May 2019

The creepy planet

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing.I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. thanks!I

was going in to space and I saw a weird planet so we pulled into the weird planet, it was fun there but I saw  1000 old wet trees. The trees looked like a war there it smelled like wet trees and wet grass. It was creepy and then we went to the red bridge and the sky was black, red, gray, and with something in the sky that made it creepier than a monster with flammable eyes with a sharp nose. It’s so creepy man just help me get back home please my spaceship brock down Please just help me please.
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