I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 2 July 2019
Matariki around the world
We have been learning about how Matariki is celebrated around the world. Take a look at my thinglink to find out about how other cultures celebrate
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Thursday, 13 June 2019
My Dream House
Friday, 3 May 2019
The creepy planet
This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing.I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. thanks!I

was going in to space and I saw a weird planet so we pulled into the weird planet, it was fun there but I saw 1000 old wet trees. The trees looked like a war there it smelled like wet trees and wet grass. It was creepy and then we went to the red bridge and the sky was black, red, gray, and with something in the sky that made it creepier than a monster with flammable eyes with a sharp nose. It’s so creepy man just help me get back home please my spaceship brock down Please just help me please.
was going in to space and I saw a weird planet so we pulled into the weird planet, it was fun there but I saw 1000 old wet trees. The trees looked like a war there it smelled like wet trees and wet grass. It was creepy and then we went to the red bridge and the sky was black, red, gray, and with something in the sky that made it creepier than a monster with flammable eyes with a sharp nose. It’s so creepy man just help me get back home please my spaceship brock down Please just help me please.
The end.
Friday, 11 May 2018
Thursday, 3 May 2018
100 word challenge
Walt use 100 words to write a story
Once upon a time there was a haunted house.There was a grave. It was misty and also creepy. There were noises and I wanted to go inside.I grabbed heaps of supplies and I arrived at the crimson haunted house. I looked around and I kicked the door down.Frantically I went into the house and heard a ghost. I wasn't scared, then I heard scratches. I got a little scared and I heard someone scream “awi” and shouted really loud. I got scared. I finally looked around the whole entire haunted house and then I went back home.
Friday, 13 April 2018
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