My Dream House

We have been learning how to design our dream house .My dream house has 2 bedrooms,1 bathroom, 1 lounge,living areas and. The feature that I love about my house is my room.

The creepy planet

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing.I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. thanks!I

was going in to space and I saw a weird planet so we pulled into the weird planet, it was fun there but I saw  1000 old wet trees. The trees looked like a war there it smelled like wet trees and wet grass. It was creepy and then we went to the red bridge and the sky was black, red, gray, and with something in the sky that made it creepier than a monster with flammable eyes with a sharp nose. It’s so creepy man just help me get back home please my spaceship brock down Please just help me please.

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Rata and the Waka

We have been doing some critical thinking with the story of Rata and his waka.

100 word challenge

                        Walt use 100 words to write a story
                                             

Once upon a time there was a haunted house.There was a grave. It was misty and also creepy. There were noises and I wanted to go inside.I grabbed heaps of supplies and I arrived at the crimson haunted house. I looked around and I kicked the door down.Frantically I went into the house and heard a ghost. I wasn't scared, then I heard scratches. I got a little scared and I heard someone scream “awi” and shouted really loud. I got scared. I finally looked around the whole entire haunted house and then I went back home.

100 Word Challenge

This week we were given a story starter but what if I was on making my story interesting and staying within the 100 Word limit.


But what if i was in charge I would be in charge of the roads phones and play stations.I could tell people what to on them do on the roads and phones.At all times so I can get to school on time everyday on time.So i'm not late for school everyday.Other people's phones.when ever I want to go on there phones they will say no.So i will get them when i'm bored and I will play on the play stations.because I really really want to play on them because they are fun and cool.