I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 3 May 2018
100 word challenge
Walt use 100 words to write a story
Once upon a time there was a haunted house.There was a grave. It was misty and also creepy. There were noises and I wanted to go inside.I grabbed heaps of supplies and I arrived at the crimson haunted house. I looked around and I kicked the door down.Frantically I went into the house and heard a ghost. I wasn't scared, then I heard scratches. I got a little scared and I heard someone scream “awi” and shouted really loud. I got scared. I finally looked around the whole entire haunted house and then I went back home.
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