I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 13 June 2019
My Dream House
We have been learning how to design our dream house .My dream house has 2 bedrooms,1 bathroom, 1 lounge,living areas and. The feature that I love about my house is my room.
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Hello Joseph.
ReplyDeleteThis is one cool looking dream house.
Do you have a basketball hoop in your bedroom?.
Maybe next time you could just check to make sure you have completed all your sentences.